On this 2nd raft I have changed a few things of which were suggested to me when I asked for feedback on my 1st draft. firstly I have change the font as before it had been said that it didn’t really fit the genre and audience of which I am targeting and now my new font is more bold, outstanding and shape edge's which suit's the genre on Hip-Hop as they have bold personality and edgy. I have played with the picture and I feel I have improved it by making it bright and it just looks clearer. Also I have added the price for U.K and for the U.S and moved the date down the same place as the price which is by the barcode which I have also decreases the size of.
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